Work on HUD, stands out way too much. Also, it is ugly.
Walkcycle: arms need follow through. Essentially also a lot of secondary and tertiary movement.
Logo options are fine.
Try to develop the Title more, make it more unique. Work on it to make it more your OWN.
Fonts are good overall. No problem with using them.
Controls are good, just consider the dexterity of people being able to navigate right and left while also jumping with the same hand.
Happy with all else.
Lenè van Heerden 